I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss H. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Tuesday, June 2, 2020
welcome to my blog post
Hi there readers welcome to my first blog on my writing blog.
please lave a comment.
6 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
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Kia ora Bella,
ReplyDeleteNice work on getting your slide into your blog! (That is super tricky to do!) Your story sounds like you got up to a lot of fun! What is the best pokemon you have caught playing Pokemon go?
- Miss Morgan
Hi miss morgan
Deletethakyou so much for commenting.
Hi Bella,
ReplyDeleteIt is great to see that you have blogged some work! You did some great planning for this piece of writing. I can't wait to read it when it is finished. Perhaps increasing the size of your font (words) on slide 3 would be a good idea, that way it will be easier for people to read. Maybe this is something that you could finish a home if you don't get a chance in class this week. Let me know when you're done as I would love to read it. I am wondering what your favourite thing to bake is, mine is chocolate chunk cookies!
Mrs McIntyre
thankyou
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ReplyDeletel was meat to say thankyou
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